Sunday, November 25, 2007

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wish


(omnispheric ode: first draft)





poor shorebound me,
my windy eyes tossed
up to sky

poor dead-weight me,
my gravitas
a wingless sigh

poor autumn earth
bound to this flightless
heap, to frost and dew

but o to live upon
the wind, eternity
a leap through blue







2 Comments:

Blogger Joseph Gallo said...

simply lovely, this. a wingless sigh; a leap through blue.

4:56 p.m.  
Blogger Eroteme said...

Very beautifully felt and composed... I am glad that you have allowed rhyme into your poem! I loved the phrase "wingless sigh"

1:28 a.m.  

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